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Kiri by ~pyromaniac03:iconpyromaniac03:

Categories Fan Art > Manga/Anime > Digital > Movies/TV

©2008-2009 ~pyromaniac03
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Gah! ew ew ew eww =.=; This came out worse than hoped... =[

so I'm going to dedicate this ugly picture to :iconlost-in-shangrila: =D well, I lost my bet and so I told you I would dedicate my next picture to you, and we hoped it would be a yaoi one but nope, a worse one came out ^.^

Maybe it was because it was rushed...I am supposed to be sleeping now but I really wanted to post this up before I slept... so please, please let me know honestly what you think! send me some criticisms! =0

This was supposed to be drawn specially for the next Armageddon, because I heard Liam O'Brien's coming (not sure if it's the Christchurch one...but still crossing my fingers) and so I thought I should draw a picture of one of his charas as a kind of tribute...-ish-thing. oh well, even if he doesn't come, it was kinda fun drawing Vincent in my style =|.

GO VINCENT!

please do let me know your opinions! i really should go sleep now... Zzz

P.S. I'm really sorry, Aduviri-san, I have lost interest in illustrating Cold Love =[[ I'm so sorry, but I will keep on drawing pages! I will keep on drawing them but they will be posted up veeery slowly.... =[ sorry I'm not a commited person!

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~eXdrachen Feb 18, 2008, 5:20:44 AM
Aw, 't ain't that bad, I'd say the crotch/legs look kinda weird, but, then again, who am I to complain? Wouldn't do better in a million years (well... maybe in a million and one, I would, but... :XD: )
The colors and composition are nice, tho.

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~catt-gal-2006 Feb 18, 2008, 5:36:50 AM
everything's ok in here, honestly! i mean, this guy vincent here is hawt (which matters the most ^ o ^) and his pose is awesome, lighting and color is alright as well as layout altogether. the only thing not working for me is his body part waist-down. his legs look weird, that's all ^-^

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*Mutenroushi Feb 18, 2008, 6:36:41 AM
Lovely layout and shading :) I like the guy's face too.
I would only pay more attention to his lower parts, and maybe to the rushed background.
Ah... red is a bit strange against green... maybe you should let his clothes gray? Well, just a though.

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~PropertyoftheUchiha Feb 18, 2008, 7:16:55 AM
i love his eyes. :3 ... only comment I have - well i tink we have the same problem... sometimes the shadows are still too light, that some portions lack definition and then look kind of flat. :( ... But im telling you this is awesome lineart and your charas are defo not bad!

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~pyromaniac03 Feb 18, 2008, 10:45:37 AM
LoL this is not my O.C. ^^; it's from an anime called Ergo Proxy, and thank u very much for the comment PotU =] I will work on the shadows and lighting! *bow*

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I believe that Ross and Rachel were on a break.
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~pyromaniac03 Feb 18, 2008, 10:46:42 AM
^^; oops, he's a real anime character and his clothes are orange (-.- terrible clothes, i would say) so I can't really change it.... hm... but I think I can make it more unsaturated I guess? =D thank u very much for your comment! I really appreciate it =]

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I believe that Ross and Rachel were on a break.
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~pyromaniac03 Feb 18, 2008, 10:48:20 AM
HAHA Yes yes, I think so too! after waist-down, I tried to make it like... smaller or so, because i wanted the picture to have and angle-thing... looks like I blew it ^^;

thank u very much for the comment! I really appreciate it =]]]

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I believe that Ross and Rachel were on a break.
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~pyromaniac03 Feb 18, 2008, 10:49:11 AM
:XD: :XD: LoL ok, yes I will work on drawing.... legs and crotches =.=; ahaha but thank u so much for commenting! I'm really glad you like it too =D

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I believe that Ross and Rachel were on a break.
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~RainDragonX Feb 18, 2008, 3:19:23 PM
I like how you did the hair and the eyes! I really can't offer any more advice to than what's been said so... it's an awesome pic as usual. :D

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~Armageddons-Day Feb 18, 2008, 3:51:49 PM
*A* so pretty~~~ <3
I love the lighting and theme of this pic ^^
the only thing that's bothering me is his crotch LOL I think he needs looser pants XDDD

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